Tuesday, October 25, 2011

I Believe

                 
 Authors  Note: what this story is trying to tell you is that we have to stand up to are country .

I’m proud of my country because my grandpa was in the Karina war and made it out alive. Thank god because I got to meet him but he was sick for a long time then he got better than 2 years ago he passed away.  I was so sad then just about a year from now my grandma had passed away I was sad. All of the other country’s think that we are going to collapse in government and other stuff  but I don’t want to give up on this country because I believe that we are a great country. Maybe that all of the stuff on 911wasn’t like everyone thought it was what if the world trade center was going down any way and they just wanted people to hit it down instead of setting up a demolition, maybe.        

 I think the government is tell most of the story about 9/11 but I also think that the government is hiding some information about 9/11 that the world needs to know. What I think is maybe that the terrorist attack wasn’t entirely a terrorist attack maybe one plane got out of control the first time to hit one of the buildings then the second plane was the ones that got hijacked and hit the second building. But no one will know unless the government tell us the whole story about 9/11 but maybe they are telling the whole true. If the world cannot know about the whole story about 9/11 then we might get attacked from one of our allies like china .Maybe they will turn on use because we are down too much money to china and maybe they want to take over are country to  get the money that they need to make their place even better and make us slaves .
           
           

Friday, October 7, 2011

The Unsinkable

Author's Note: What i thought about this essay is much lives were lost by the sinking of the titanic.



It was a cold dark night as the ship made its way to New York. After dancing and dining the unthinkable thing just happened. The ship had just collided will an ice berg and the ship was sinking. This may sound like a story but it’s not, this happened in real life. The ship designer thought that the titanic was unsinkable but that wasn’t entirely true.

Although the ship designer was wrong the ship had to have at least one or 2 parts to make that ship sink. Just because the titanic sank by one ice berg I’m mean come on one ice berg how does the titanic sink to one ice berg. I could believe that the Ice berg was pretty big saying that it sunk the titanic a really big ship back in the day. The ship sunk from the front to the back so where the ice berg hit  the titanic must of been to big of an ice berg to get away from it .By the time workers  tried to stop the engine to make the titanic  slow down to drift away from the  ice berg I was to late.

Why I think the ship designer is wrong is because one the ship sank and two the ship had to at least have one part to make it sink. When the ice berg hit the titanic kept moving really slow maybe that caused the ship to sink if they stop maybe they could of closed it if they had the materials. I might be wrong but they could doesn’t matter the ship is still sinking of tried at least because what more could of went wrong the ship goes down really fast .Besides going down slow it both was and lives are being lost. If I was the designer I wouldn’t of said that the titanic was unsinkable because most likely everything can get destroyed .    although the ship designer was wrong about saying the titanic was unsinkable now he knows to never say anything is unsinkable . I hope the ship designer got taught a very good lesson  to never say anything is unsinkable.