Friday, October 7, 2011

The Unsinkable

Author's Note: What i thought about this essay is much lives were lost by the sinking of the titanic.



It was a cold dark night as the ship made its way to New York. After dancing and dining the unthinkable thing just happened. The ship had just collided will an ice berg and the ship was sinking. This may sound like a story but it’s not, this happened in real life. The ship designer thought that the titanic was unsinkable but that wasn’t entirely true.

Although the ship designer was wrong the ship had to have at least one or 2 parts to make that ship sink. Just because the titanic sank by one ice berg I’m mean come on one ice berg how does the titanic sink to one ice berg. I could believe that the Ice berg was pretty big saying that it sunk the titanic a really big ship back in the day. The ship sunk from the front to the back so where the ice berg hit  the titanic must of been to big of an ice berg to get away from it .By the time workers  tried to stop the engine to make the titanic  slow down to drift away from the  ice berg I was to late.

Why I think the ship designer is wrong is because one the ship sank and two the ship had to at least have one part to make it sink. When the ice berg hit the titanic kept moving really slow maybe that caused the ship to sink if they stop maybe they could of closed it if they had the materials. I might be wrong but they could doesn’t matter the ship is still sinking of tried at least because what more could of went wrong the ship goes down really fast .Besides going down slow it both was and lives are being lost. If I was the designer I wouldn’t of said that the titanic was unsinkable because most likely everything can get destroyed .    although the ship designer was wrong about saying the titanic was unsinkable now he knows to never say anything is unsinkable . I hope the ship designer got taught a very good lesson  to never say anything is unsinkable.

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