Friday, May 24, 2013

Today’s Society vs. Ribbons


Author's Note: This piece was written to demonstrate my knowledge of Text Analysis

 Can you just imagine what little girls had to go through when they were younger in china?  Many children hundreds of years ago had to suffer for the rest of their lives, because of what parents thought was beautiful. Their mothers would put their feet under a stool, so the bones in their feet would transform into a different formation. This is the pain they will have to go through for the rest of their life, walking around with pegs, and small shoes. What would you do for beauty, just to look beautiful at that moment of time?

 In the story “Ribbons” it talks about a Chinese girl named Stacy  who loved ballet but almost had to give it all up because her parents wanted their grandma to come live with them.  Stacy had a hard time because Paw-paw was favoring Ian not her. Beauty plays a role in this story, because her grandma has terrible feet the reason why she never wants to talk about it is, because when she was little her mother binded her feet this happens in China. back then that was there way of showing their  beauty. They thought that rich guys would take care of them because their feet were beautiful. So Paw-Paw had live with her feet like that for a long time. I think Modern society has changed our ideal of  beauty. In quite dramatic ways.

 For example, Girls are getting skinner and guys are getting bulkier. Also wrinkles seem to be the thing of the past. In my opinion I think Hollywood plays a big role in this because look at all of the actors and actresses, singers and dancers. What do they all have in common? That’s right false beauty. I think we shouldn’t waste our time on looking good and being pretty.  I think we should spend time a helping out the world like helping nature or finding cures for cancer.

  Furthermore people these days spend so much money on trying to look good. Like dying their hair, Botox, and much more, but instead they should spend their money for people in need, like making a change in the world to make yourself noticed about the good things you do. Not getting  noticed on how beautiful you are or getting noticed by getting plastic surgery. I really don’t care how I look but most other people I think today do. That’s a shame because they waste all that  money on makeup and clothes and surgery just to make themselves look better when they actually don’t.  

 A pain that will never  be forgotten is the foot binding many children who lived in china had to go though. Then suffered with the pain the rest of their life’s.  The pain that everyone goes through is not necessary.  If  it was today  society or if it was hundreds of years ago.  Help someone that actually needs money not just beauty that’s painful.

Friday, May 10, 2013

the Lightning thief


Author's Note: I did a text analysis piece and I did it on if the setting was different how would effect the character's?

Text Analysis  


  If Greek Mythology was real what would it be like? Well In the book  Percy Jackson and the Lightning Thief Greek Mythology is real and is all about the Greek gods. This book is about this boy named Percy and he finds out he is the son of a god Poseidon, and he is accused of stealing the Lightning Bolt From Zeus. So he has to go on a quest to get his mother back and to find the lightning bolt. The setting is really important in my opinion because it can change the whole story just by it changing. It effects the characters and that is really important to.
  
  Furthermore , what if the setting was different how would that effect the character? Like for example, what if Percy never made it to camp half-blood like he did in the book and the movie. How that effects the character is because then he never finds out who he really is and doesn't know that he is accused of stealing the bolt. Which is really important in this story. Why it’s important is because if he didn't find out he was accused and didn't try to get the bolt back to Zeus, a big war between the gods would've broken out.
  
  Also the plot is effected when the setting changes. The plot is that Zeus’s bolt is stolen and he accuses Percy. And if the setting was changed that means Percy wouldn't  of known that he was accused of stealing the bolt. That’s why if effects the plot because than the whole world would of died because of the war between the gods. Changing the setting means a lot in so many ways that’s why the setting is so important in every book.
  
  In conclusion I would like to say that the setting means a lot if changed. It effects how the characters act and play a role in the book. So that’s really important and also it effects the plot which plays a big role too. So my point of this whole piece was to try to say that changing the setting effects the characters and the plot a lot and that it makes a difference too.